Comments by S Roter on Tue, 08/18/09 19:31
My eye was immediately drawn to her eyes, strong but friendly. Shadows are open and the detail is sharp and I like her expression lovely portrait. The left hand fingers should be extended similar to her right hand, or leave her hand behind her out of the shot.
Comments by Jan Bjorklund on Tue, 08/18/09 19:46
I like your use of the boards in this image... first they lead the eyes of the viewer to the little girl (one almost wants the child to be slightly further back in the picture so that the flow of the boards would be enhanced) and second as the child leads against the wall there is a certain sense created in the image (a tentativeness combined with a touch of curiosity). And as with Steve the child's eyes become the focal point of the picture for me.
Comments by Dan Rubin on Wed, 08/19/09 10:56
Excellent work! I'm curious as to what camera and lens you are using here.
Comments by Jeff Dye on Wed, 08/19/09 12:06
I'm with Roter on leaving her left hand out of the comp. It looks odd because it seems
disconnected from her, like someone else's hand reaching through between her and the
boards. Beautiful expression and lighting though.
Comments by susanlohan on Mon, 08/31/09 14:53
Wonderful Pictures! Cheer!
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Comments by Bob Buckles on Thu, 10/01/09 22:31
I think the image could be improved if you would tone down/darken the lower 1/2 of the frame and keep more attention to the girl's face. Otherwise, nice "catch."
Comments by Bob Buckles on Thu, 10/01/09 22:41
Here's what I was trying to convey.
Comments by Bob Buckles on Thu, 10/01/09 22:41
A little more extreme
