Sunset Storm

this picture i took when i had a night class over the summer

Posted by Taylor Hills on Sat, 09/19/09 15:29
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Comments by Jan Bjorklund on Sat, 09/19/09 15:41

I like the saturated painterly feel of your sunset composition with the telephone pole serving to connect the two areas of strong color in the sunset sky. I think I would have tried to move the telephone pole out of the central position in the picture.

Comments by Jeff Dye on Sat, 09/19/09 16:16

A very dramatic sky that deserved more of your attention. IMO the pole has no place,
centered or otherwise. Moving beyond the pole you could've filled the frame with sky and
skipped all the stuff on the ground.