Posted by jason wilmot on Thu, 03/28/13 13:35
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Comments by Michael Meek on Thu, 03/28/13 15:10

So much of what you have here is wonderful, yet the extended arm doesn't seem to fit with her lovely, relaxed face, nor does orange seem like the best skin color for her. Still, you are close to having something special.


Comments by Jeff Dye on Thu, 03/28/13 15:41

Meek got in ahead of me with the same thoughts so I'll just ditto and add the suggestion
to clone the little circular hot spots if you choose to leave it as is. Very nice without the
arm.


Comments by Jan Bjorklund on Thu, 03/28/13 16:16

I like this image with a cropping from the left edge to match up with the area in the right of the picture. I just find the extended arm works to lead the eyes of the viewer out of the picture while with a cropped version the viewer's attention can remain on the young woman's features.


Comments by jason wilmot on Thu, 03/28/13 16:40

hows this


Comments by Jeff Dye on Thu, 03/28/13 17:53

Great improvement.